Showing posts with label Brandon Sanderson. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Brandon Sanderson. Show all posts

Friday, April 5, 2013

Book Review: The Rithmatist by Brandon Sanderson

I was excited to get my hands on an ARC for Brandon Sanderson's upcoming YA novel: The Rithmatist. I should note, for the purpose of full disclosure, that I am a HUGE Sanderson fan. Will that introduce a level of bias on my part? Likely. I had picked this up with huge expectations and I must admit, I was not let down. I'll hit on what I liked, didn't like, and do my best to avoid spoilers.

Plot (taken from the book description)


More than anything, Joel wants to be a Rithmatist. Chosen by the Master in a mysterious inception ceremony, Rithmatists have the power to infuse life into two-dimensional figures known as Chalklings. Rithmatists are humanity’s only defense against the Wild Chalklings—merciless creatures that leave mangled corpses in their wake. Having nearly overrun the territory of Nebrask, the Wild Chalklings now threaten all of the American Isles.

As the son of a lowly chalkmaker at Armedius Academy, Joel can only watch as Rithmatist students study the magical art that he would do anything to practice. Then students start disappearing—kidnapped from their rooms at night, leaving trails of blood. Assigned to help the professor who is investigating the crimes, Joel and his friend Melody find themselves on the trail of an unexpected discovery—one that will change Rithmatics—and their world—forever.

What I Liked


Oh, boy. Where to begin?

1) Characters. I really liked the characters. I felt the characters of non-Rithmatist Joel and Rithmatists Melody and Professor Fitch were fantastic. They came to life for me, all having their own distinct personalities. I liked the absent-minded manner that Fitch mentored Joel and I liked the type of relationship that Joel and Melody have. They are complete opposites of each other and I thought Sanderson played with that brilliantly.

2) Setting. Most of this takes place at a school, so this does have a bit of a Harry Potter feel to it. In fact, I think you can draw a lot of similarities, almost like if Harry Potter went to Hogwarts with an interest in magic, but could not perform magic himself. There are more, but I think to delve into that would introduce too many spoilers. For some reason, this really added a level of resonance that made me feel comfortable reading this book.

3) World building. The world building is fantastic! This seems to be our world, with even some familiar historical figures, like Leonardo Da Vinci. However, the landscape is slightly different with America being broken up into a number of islands and such. The United States are named slightly different because of this, for instance he makes reference to a East Carolina and Nebrask, which I imagine is the island of Nebraska.

Because this has the magic system of Rithmatics, which seemed to be introduced in this world about 600 year prior, technology took off in a different direction. There are no engines like we have today, but a huge focus on gear-driven machinery. On the American cover of the book you can see a horse with a bunch of gears sticking out of it, this is how they get around in this version of our world. What fascinated me the most was a train that they took, which was spring-loaded and also seemed to fly over land and over water. It was subtle in the background, but I thought that scene alone really brought this world to life.

A big, though minor to this story, change was the naming and customs of the countries. Apparently, the Aztecs thrived and a common European staple appears to be what we would consider Asian foods. Again, subtle, but added to the history of this world.

4) The Magic System. Brandon Sanderson has been known to come up with amazing magic systems. When I heard he was doing a chalk-drawing book I imagined some kid drawing a dinosaur and suddenly having a new pet. Well, it doesn't happen quite that way. This magic system has certain limitations and capabilities, as every good magic system should. I'll cover how I struggled with the magic system a bit, but in the long run I totally fell in love with it. Reading this book, there appears to be a lot of things yet to be discovered, and I look forward to see what Sanderson does with it in future books.

5) The artwork. This is a book on chalk drawings, so of course this book has a lot of artwork inside of it. There is a form of dueling that is performed with the chalk drawings, which is central to the entire plot, and Ben McSweeney draws several instances of how the chalk drawings work. Also, there are drawings here and there throughout the rest of the text, fleshing out the chalk drawings that Sanderson had depicted in the story.

I loved it.

It really helped me make sense of the chalk-drawing magic system and allowed me to visualize a lot of what was going on in the story. I'm sure there will be an audiobook version of this, but I would suggest picking up the actual book instead for the artwork alone.

And when I say artwork, I don't mean that there are pictures of what happens in the story. All of the artwork--with the possible exception of one picture--is what is drawn with chalk by the Rithmatists. So they aren't high-quality, really. Just informative.

6) The ending. I thought this had a satisfying ending. Sanderson is great at adding twists to the end of his stories, and I didn't see this one coming at all. I loved it. Also, it has one of the best denouements I've ever read. This is a first of a series, so it does leave you wanting more. No cliffhanger, thank goodness, but this is a great setup to a series that I'm sure is only going to get better.

I could not put this book down the last 100 pages, which left me reading until way past my bedtime. I paid for it with sleepiness the next day at work, but it was WORTH IT!

7) Religion. I was fairly surprised what impact Rithmatics plays in religion. I thought Sanderson worked in the topic of religion in this imaginary world quite well. I'm sure future books will delve more into this, but I thought this book did a great job of introcuing the religion and its role over Rithmatists.

What I Didn't Like


1) Length. Only 370 pages? I thought this was a Sanderson novel!! Well, this is one of his shorter works, but it was long enough to tell the story he wanted to. I wouldn't have complained if this were longer and more of the magic system was fleshed out. I guess we'll get that in future books.

2) The Secret Societies. This seems to be a world where Rithmatists are supposed to keep secrets to themselves, and they even have a secret section of the library. So, there is a lot of mystery, but I just didn't buy it. It seems that if a character befriended the right person who was willing to talk they could find out all they wanted to about Rithmatists. Also, you can check out the books in the secret section, which means borrowing the books from Rithmatic friends isn't difficult. Well, for me, it seemed that anybody could figure out anything they wanted if they were willing to spend a little initiative trying to figure it out.

3) The learning curve. For some reason, I struggled understanding how Rithmatic dueling worked. I had an easier time understanding Allomancy in Sanderson's Mistborn series. I stopped reading about a third of the way through and tried to see if I was missing a frame of reference or something. Best I can tell, this is a very unique magic system, so I just continued with the book.

I'm not sure where I felt comfortable with the magic system, but in time it finally did click. This might just be me and a personal hangup. But if you are reading this and having problems grasping the magic system, hang in there. It seems to come together well enough.

Conclusion


I loved this book and can't wait for more to be written. It isn't perfect, but what book is? So, I'm giving it a 4 1/2 out of 5 stars (round it up to 5). Like I mentioned, this is the ARC (Advanced Reader Copy) and I noticed a few mistakes throughout. When this book is released I'm looking forward to picking up another copy and reading it again... with the typos fixed, keeping an eye on the twist, and with a better understanding of Rithmatics throughout the book.

If you love urban fantasies with unique magic systems, this is right up your ally! If you, like me, love Brandon Sanderson, then I don't think you'll be disappointed in this book.

Tuesday, February 14, 2012

Top 10 Highlights of LTUE

Happy Valentine's Day! Sorry, but this is not that kind of post.

February 9-11, 2012 was the 30th annual Life, The Universe, and Everything (LTUE) Writing Conference which was held at Utah Valley University. It is very instructional and useful to anybody established or working on becoming a writer.
In the spirit of David Letterman, I thought I would highlight the top ten things I loved about LTUE.

#10 - Making New Connections

LTUE is largely about making new connections, and there are many opportunities to meet new people with similar interests. Whether hanging out in the hall where somebody shared with me their tips on publishing, attending the banquet at the end where I sat at a table with people I've never seen before, or just turning to the person next to you in a class and asking them what they are working on.

One example was when I went into the seller's room and met David Power King. He was talking about a website to help people with their blogs (and I need help!) called inkPageant. David was nice enough to offer a quick glance at my blog and to offer advise.

When he got here he said, "Hey, this place looks familiar." He glanced to the right and, yep, there was his smiling face in the list of this blog's followers. So while I didn't know him from Adam on my blog, I'm glad I do now. It was nice bumping into him over the next couple of days and giving a quick, "Hey, Dave!" as we passed by.

#9 - Meeting People I've Only Known From Twitter/Online

It wasn't just about new connections. When I went to LDS Story Makers I hardly new anybody there. Like LTUE, I did make a few friends (I'll touch on that in #8) but, otherwise, I barely scratched the surface. Luckily, they have a writer's group from Story Maker attendees in various ways.

And now, I can put a face to a name! And, trust me, they all stand out in my mind because they are worth getting to know.

Elizabeth Mueller - Who gave an excellent reading of her book Darkspell.
Brenda Sills - One of the nicest people you'll ever meet in the Twitterverse.
Robin Weeks - Who moderated several of the panels.
Lani Woodland - I was so scatterbrains I had to meet her twice to have it set in (sorry, Lani).
Nichole Giles - An excellent person to follow on Twitter.
Shelly Brown - Funny and informative, everyone should follow her. Plus, the story behind her haircut makes her one of my heroes!
Jaime Theler - I only met her BRIEFLY at Story Makers.
Sarah Eden - Again, I met her briefly at Story Makers. I made sure the string of men winning her romances remained unbroken.
Carolyn Frank - We are in the same writing group through AI. I almost missed her on my rush between classes, but I"m glad I didn't convince myself to visit with her later. I would have missed out on a great opportunity.
Daron Fraley - Probably the only person I recognized from his Twitter profile picture before glancing at his name badge.

#8 - Seeing Old Friends

It was nice to catch up with those who I have met in person.

T.J. Bronley - I sat next to him during the AI Social. More on him in #4.
Tristi Pinkston - Editor Extraordinaire!! I had met her at one of her book signings at Costco, as well as her son. If you are looking for an editor to go over your work, I recommend Tristi. Without a doubt, it will be her I take my work to first when I finish. Just be aware that there is a long waiting list to get to her. She is in high demand! Another great note, she has recently lost 80+ pounds. Want to know more? Just visit her weight loss update and blog post.

#7 - The Panels

The panels were fantastic! The moderators asked good questions and the people they chose to answer them were experts in the field. Here is a list of the panels I attended. Go ahead, tell me you aren't jealous!

Tolkien and Lewis: Why they are still relevant after seventy years
Evil in Fiction: Creating Conflict (James Dashner was on this panel)
100 Story Ideas in 1 Hour (Dan Wells was on this panel)
How to Write a Good Short Story
The Principles of Suspense (James Dashner was here, too)
Book Bombs: How to Make an Amazon.com Best Seller
Why We Love Horror
Little Stories Everywhere: Using Blogging as Practice for Writing Fiction
Plots, Subplots, and Foreshadowing (Brandon Sanderson, the master of all three topics, and James Owen was on this excellent panel)

#6 - The Classes

Like the panels, the classes were fantastic! Again, a list of classes attended. There were more classes than panels, so I'm going to list a few of my favorites:

The Fractal Key to Narrative Complexity
Creating Effective Villains
From Idea to Story
Avoid Cliche Like the Plague
Writing Action
Story Structure
Self-editing and Revision (Tristi taught this, see #8 for more info)
The Good and the Bad of Speculative Fiction
Accomplishing Your Goals as a Writer (by Brandon Mull, who actually covered a lot of ground but not how to accomplish your goals as a writer)

#5 - The Instructors

Imagine spending three days learning at the feet of some great instructors, including Brandon Sanderson, Dave Farland, Brandon Mull, James Dashner, James Owen, Tristi Pinkston, Larry Correia, and Dan Wells -- as well as many others. The instructors were amazing. I think everybody -- no matter their skill level -- walked away from this conference learning something new to apply to their writing.

#4 - Lunch on Saturday

After standing in the Subway line for 40 minutes I joined a bunch of the online buddies I listed above (#9 and #8). It dawned on me later that the three I chat with the most over Twitter were the three I sat next to. Thank you for a wonderful lunch break, T.J., Jaime, and Shelly! If I haven't made it clear: All three are fun to connect with through Twitter.

#3 - The Book Signing

I was really excited for this. So excited, in fact, I forgot to bring all the books I meant to have signed. Luckily my copy of Way of Kings (spoiler: one of the best books ever) was in my car so I did get Brandon Sanderson to sign it. I didn't forget my camera, so I got a few pics with some great authors:

I'm going to get wordy here.

I got in line for Brandon Sanderson first, since the back of it stretched closest to the room's entrance. I've been wanting to meet him in person for a VERY long time. His assistant, Peter, was nice enough to take a picture of us.


Next, I headed over to see Tyler Whitesides. I missed it when he was handing out copies of his book, Janitors, at LDS Story Makers the year before, but I managed to beat a signed copy out of somebody. So I read it, reviewed it on my blog, and befriended him on Facebook. 

I did meet with him briefly at Story Makers (not sure if he remembers, I'd be surprised) and I thought he was a very nice guy. Everybody who knows him also says he is a very nice person. Meeting Tyler again sealed the deal for me. Tyler has got to be one of the nicest people in the biz!! Thanks for making my night, Tyler!

Oh, and I got his picture:


Next, I headed to James Dashner. I had just finished his Maze Runner series and I told him how much I enjoyed it. I got his picture, too. He made the funniest comment, too. He saw me toting (lugging?) around Way of Kings and commented that the book had more pages than his entire trilogy combined. I think when Dashner's prequel to the trilogy comes out, I think it will still be shorter than Way of Kings.


And, finally, I got to meet the man of the weekend, James Owen in person. Interesting story: James Owen and I were friends on Facebook even before he was announced as the keynote for LTUE. He has a FASCINATING story. A story I think every writer should read about it. He wrote a relatively short, but inspiring book, on the journey he had to undergo in order to become what he is today. No, scratch that. Not just writers, EVERYBODY will benefit reading his book. It is called Drawing out the Dragons. HIGHLY RECOMMENDED READING!

And, of course, I got my picture with him as well!




#2 - Meeting Brandon Sanderson

Everybody who knows me learns quickly that Brandon Sanderson is my favorite author. Ever since picking up my gateway drug into Sandersonism, Elantris, I've been a die-hard fan. In fact, I've been a missionary. I've converted many others into reading his works. Have you, Mr. or Ms. Blog Reader, embraced the greatness that is Brandon Sanderson?

I now have pictures with him, Orson Scott Card, and David Farland. I think I'll be able to get a picture with Kevin J. Anderson in May. So that will nab all my favorite authors except for Stephen King. I'm not holding out much hope for that one.


#1 - The Keynote Address by James Owen

Speaking of James Owen and his book, Drawing out the Dragons, he gave a retelling of what is in the book as his keynote address. He left some things out and added some other interesting details (because the audience was primarily his religion, he added some religious details that made the story THAT MUCH BETTER).

There were many eyes that were left undried. Yes, his story is that inspirational!

The Bottom Line

I really got a lot out of this conference. When they hold it next year I would highly recommend attending if you can fit it in your schedule. It is one of the cheapest you will find out there ($30 for all three days) and Utah County is a cheap place to visit when compared to other possible destinations.

I have two writing conferences that are on my "must attend" list every year. LTUE and Story Makers, which is coming up in May. I recommend both!